Hi Dave,
It’s been an amazing week we spent at your home when I visited your hometown. I have made some amazing memories with your family and friends Mark, Kim & Laura which I will cherish for a long time. I am already missing all of you. I can’t thank you enough for inviting me over.
By the way, after I reached back home, I realized that I had left my wallet at your home. It should be on the dressing table in your room if I am not wrong. It is very important to me as it has all my ID’s like driver’s license and bank cards. I need one of my cards immediately as I am applying for a personal loan and I need it for that purpose.
It will be really helpful to me if you can send it to me through a courier service. You can find my Postal address inside my wallet in the cards section. I am sorry for the inconvenience I have created.
Take care and convey my regards to your family and our friends.
Chan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 231, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... time. I am already missing all of you. I can’t thank you enough for inviting me ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really, so, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 745.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.09340659341 4.54256449028 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28441444892 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631868131868 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.947280059 44.8134815571 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 62.0833333333 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1666666667 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.16666666667 4.34317383033 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34428506438 0.216113520407 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114351998976 0.0766984524023 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689949264585 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190607917684 0.12726935374 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103981715964 0.0580467560999 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.4 8.37731958763 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.85 8.71597938144 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.72 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.