You have lost an item of value on a train. Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter
- Describe the item
- Explain where and when you left it
- Say what action you would like the company to take
Dear Sir, or Madam,
I am writing with reference to my recent travel in one of your train, in which I lost my valuable personal.
The item is brown folder with the brand name 'XXX' embossed on the front. Inside the briefcase, I have my Identity card, Credit card, Driving license and few important office documents. All the cards have my name on it while office documents has my company's name 'SAM' printed on it.
I must have lost the folder while travelling from Stephen street to Albert bay on 24th Feb 2019 around 04:00 PM from train number 3211. If I recall correctly, I was in second coach sitting near the front door.
Could you please let me know if the folder of such description has been found? My phone number is +91-0000-0000. If you find it please keep it in safe place and I will make a pick-up arrangement to collect it at your convenience.
Thank You.
Yours Faithfully,
Mohit AA
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, while, with reference to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 751.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60736196319 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47697819517 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.687116564417 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 213.3 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5181318457 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.1 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156573330849 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622126487804 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563559679375 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0730799643419 0.12726935374 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0232913109761 0.0580467560999 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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