You have lost an item of value on train.Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter
• Describe the item
• Explain where and when you left it
• Say what action you would like the company to take
Dear Sir/Madam
I am inscribing this missive regarding the loss of expensive watch that I have lost during my journey on last weekend.
Let me explain you in detail. Last Saturday, I board the local train from 'Rajiv chownk' to Bus stand' at around 6:00pm. My coach number was A3 and seat number was 15. I was sitting on the left corner side. I vividly remember that the watch was their on my hand at that time. As, it was a duty off time and train was fully crowded with people,I was stuck in the crowd at the time when I reached my desired place.when I reached at the station, I realized that the watch was missing, but till then the train left for its next place. My watch was a rolex one with silver circular dial and my name's initial 'R' is imposed on the back of it.
I would request you and your staff to have a look on the train. Moreover, you can announce a little reward for the one who will find it out.
I hope for the positive and prompt response from your side.
Yours sincerely
Radhika
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 340, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
... and train was fully crowded with people,I was stuck in the crowd at the time when...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, moreover, regarding, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 823.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.28645833333 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.13111227765 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609375 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.0450640954 44.8134815571 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.5833333333 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133010508577 0.216113520407 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0634176941056 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768304752263 0.0603063233224 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0883071938176 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0726013478032 0.0580467560999 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.31 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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