You have moved to different house, Write a letter to your friend
Dear James,
Sorry, I haven’t written to you for so long. I have been quite busy over the last few months. How are you doing? I hope everything is okay.
We just moved to our new home. As you probably know, I had been searching for a new home for a while. My old home was a long way away from my office. In fact, the daily commute used to take nearly two hours. Now that my wife has also started working, we decided to buy an apartment in the suburb.
It is a spacious apartment with two bedrooms and a balcony. Also it is only a 5 minutes’ walk from our offices. Of course, the best thing about this home is its balcony. We can host small parties there. Also it is a great place to unwind after spending a stressful day at work.
Well, why do I have to rant on and on about my new residence? Can’t you visit us over the weekend and see it for yourself? It would be fun to have you here.
Looking forward to your visit
Best
Antony
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 61, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...rtment with two bedrooms and a balcony. Also it is only a 5 minutes' walk from ...
^^^^
Line 8, column 209, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...lcony. We can host small parties there. Also it is a great place to unwind after spe...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, well, while, in fact, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 789.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.24193548387 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30047851774 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655913978495 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 16.3608247423 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 17.8809506196 44.8134815571 40% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 43.8333333333 76.5299724578 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.3333333333 16.8248392259 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.83333333333 4.34317383033 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.94845360825 253% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124801849676 0.216113520407 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0389941945459 0.0766984524023 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455968998332 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0791931623266 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05105588516 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 3.7 8.37731958763 44% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 86.71 70.7449484536 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.7 7.45979381443 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.83 8.71597938144 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.68 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 8.62886597938 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 8.54432989691 70% => OK
text_standard: 4.0 8.15463917526 49% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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