You have participated in a party at your friend’s home last week. You may have forgotten your watch there. Write a letter to your friend and say
– Thank him/her for the party.
– Ask to look for the watch.
– Suggest what he/she should do about it.
Dear Sarah,
I hope this letter finds you in good health. I would like to take this opportunity to express my gratitude for being invited to your birthday party.
Your party was one of the memorable nights, especially because you invited all our classmates from university. I couldn't imagine how you managed to find all of us. It seems an overwhelming task to me. Being reunited after at least 5 years, and reminisce about our past made your night luminous in our mind.
Unfortunately, as soon as I got back home, I realized that my watch is missing. I do remember I had it while we were at dining room, and I guess its strap was opened when we were dancing in living room or it could have been lost somewhere else when I left your house.
Actually it is a family heirloom and my grandfather pass it down to me at my graduation party. It has a sentimental value for me and I know he would be disappointed if he found out I lost it.
I hope it would not be a trouble for you to check your apartment to see if I put it somewhere in your house. About its appearance, it is a Rado, and my family is engraved on its back, the strap is brown and its face is white.
Please let me know if you find it, I will come by to give it.
Wish to see you soon
Warm wishes,
Yasaman Bolourian
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 114, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...d all our classmates from university. I couldnt imagine how you managed to find all of ...
^^^^^^^
Line 35, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Warm wishes, Yasaman Bolourian
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, so, while, at least, i guess
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.48453608247 200% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 32.9175257732 188% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1077.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 248.0 206.0 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.34274193548 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49583419831 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592741935484 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 332.1 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1081849503 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.9285714286 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7142857143 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271380063126 0.216113520407 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832961364202 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455693327652 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121864695799 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392375171797 0.0580467560999 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.6 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.58 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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