You have a pen friend living abroad. He is interested to learn about the major news items in your country. Briefly describe any piece of news that is being broadcast on TV and reasons why you are interested to share this news with him.
- Say how you feel when you receive the letter
- Mention why the incident in question is important for you and your countrymen
- Give regards to her parents
Hello John,
Thank you for showing interest in my nation. There are many news headlines are broadcasted but I would like to share key bulletins with you. In my territory, the Prime Minister, Narender Modi won the general elections and elected as second-term Prime Minister in a row. Apart from this, India won a cricket match against Australia in the world cup.
I am glad that you are fascinated by my territory and want to know about current affairs. When I received your letter, I was delighted to know your curiosity about my motherland. I feel proud whenever someone shows interest in my state.
It is important to every countryman, who is going to be my nation's law maker. The Prime Minister of any nation is responsible for his country's development and financial growth. He is the international spoke for my motherland, who represents a nation globally.
By the way, how are your parents doing? I hope, they are doing well. Please give my wishes to your parents. I pray for them, to be fit and healthy.
Thank you again for showing interest in my country.
Best wishes,
Puneet
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 14, column 7, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t in my country. Best wishes, Puneet
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, second, so, well, apart from, i feel, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 917.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85185185185 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69371933369 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.656084656085 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.9328424978 44.8134815571 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 57.3125 76.5299724578 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.8125 16.8248392259 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3125 4.34317383033 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 7.41237113402 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200612193116 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644672572605 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686272869542 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116427482033 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598018144612 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 70.7449484536 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.96 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.