You have a pen friend living abroad. He is interested to learn about the major news items in your country. Briefly describe any piece of news that is being broadcast on TV and reasons why you are interested to share this news with him.
In your letter
- Say how you feel when you receive the letter
- Mention why the incident in question is important for you and your countrymen
Dear Ronald,
I have received your letter 2 days ago. I am glad to hear from you and the feeling is nostalgic. First, I would like to know about your wellbeing. How are things going on in Canada, as I have not heard from you since you moved to Canada? You have mentioned to share information on the major news about which I am quite interested as there are a plethora of news which are also covered on our Daily News Channel.
I would like to share this with you as this query you have asked would make you feel proud of being an Indian. The changes that took place in India, when you were not here were quite interesting. You know what? The current GDP of India has reached to 6% which is quite high in comparison to previous year. This is a big achievement for India and I am surprised about it as this change took place in the presence of our new prime minister "Narendra Modi", who is a part of "Bhartiya Janta Party". Recently, he has taken a proliferation decision of using demonization as one of the weapons to fight against corruption and this has brought a drastic change in the economy, which also result in reduction of corruption from our country and also vanished almost 90% of black money from market. This contributed a lot towards the welfare of the people and country. Hence, I am sharing this information.
At the end I would say, you are my best buddy and always will. Keep writing to me as this makes our bond stronger. Give my best regards to your parents too.
I am eager to receive a reply from you about your views on these changes took place.
Your best friend,
Prateek Nayyar
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 26.3917525773 174% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1341.0 937.175257732 143% => OK
No of words: 298.0 206.0 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 3.78020617076 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54679416783 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 127.690721649 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55033557047 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 410.4 290.88556701 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.0559183664 44.8134815571 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.5 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5555555556 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.61111111111 4.34317383033 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 7.41237113402 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294336005304 0.216113520407 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0883553857394 0.0766984524023 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068582343723 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167685872538 0.12726935374 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.092899493489 0.0580467560999 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 41.2886597938 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.