You have received a bill from a mobile phone company for international call charges relating to a time when you did not use your phone for international call. Write a letter to company
Complaining about this
Giving your reasons
Asking for bill to be changed
<p style="margin-bottom: 0px; font-stretch: normal; font-size: 18px; line-height: normal; font-family: "Lucida Grande";"><span style="font-kerning: none">Dear Sir/Madam, </span></p>
<p style="margin-bottom: 0px; font-stretch: normal; font-size: 18px; line-height: normal; font-family: "Lucida Grande"; min-height: 21px;"><br><span style="font-kerning: none"></span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px; font-stretch: normal; font-size: 18px; line-height: normal; font-family: "Lucida Grande";"><span style="font-kerning: none">I am writing this email to express my disappointed with the October's bill for my cell phone, as it mentioned some pending payments on my line during my annual vacation. </span></p>
<p style="margin-bottom: 0px; font-stretch: normal; font-size: 18px; line-height: normal; font-family: "Lucida Grande"; min-height: 21px;"><br><span style="font-kerning: none"></span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px; font-stretch: normal; font-size: 18px; line-height: normal; font-family: "Lucida Grande";"><span style="font-kerning: none">Honestly, I've left my personal mobile at my home between the 29th of September till 1st of November, and I can certainly, assured you that no one used my mobile at that time. However, I shocked when I went into your company in order to pay what I thought that only monthly fees, but the employee informed me that there are several international calls have been made in October, during my holiday. I can send you a copy of my flight details and hotel reservations to prove my absence during that time. </span></p>
<p style="margin-bottom: 0px; font-stretch: normal; font-size: 18px; line-height: normal; font-family: "Lucida Grande"; min-height: 21px;"><br><span style="font-kerning: none"></span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px; font-stretch: normal; font-size: 18px; line-height: normal; font-family: "Lucida Grande";"><span style="font-kerning: none">I would like therefore to double check the provided invoice again, and revise it as soon as possible, since my mobile line has been suspended due to such error and a plethora of business calls have been missed. </span></p>
<p style="margin-bottom: 0px; font-stretch: normal; font-size: 18px; line-height: normal; font-family: "Lucida Grande"; min-height: 21px;"><br><span style="font-kerning: none"></span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px; font-stretch: normal; font-size: 18px; line-height: normal; font-family: "Lucida Grande";"><span style="font-kerning: none">I would appreciate your immediate action to this urgent matter. </span></p>
<p style="margin-bottom: 0px; font-stretch: normal; font-size: 18px; line-height: normal; font-family: "Lucida Grande"; min-height: 21px;"><br><span style="font-kerning: none"></span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px; font-stretch: normal; font-size: 18px; line-height: normal; font-family: "Lucida Grande";"><span style="font-kerning: none">Regards </span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px; font-stretch: normal; font-size: 18px; line-height: normal; font-family: "Lucida Grande"; min-height: 21px;"><span style="font-kerning: none"></span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px; font-stretch: normal; font-size: 18px; line-height: normal; font-family: "Lucida Grande";"><span style="font-kerning: none">Bilal </span></p>
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
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Line 5, column 466, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...immediate action to this urgent matter.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, honestly, however, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3337.0 937.175257732 356% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 359.0 206.0 174% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 9.29526462396 4.54256449028 205% => Less chars per word wanted.
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 3.78020617076 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 7.14735223519 2.54303337028 281% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.384401114206 0.622605031667 62% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 775.8 290.88556701 267% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.2 1.41237113402 156% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 59.0 16.3608247423 361% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 425.305935638 44.8134815571 949% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 556.166666667 76.5299724578 727% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 59.8333333333 16.8248392259 356% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 4.34317383033 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0272499978516 0.216113520407 13% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0414351437123 0.0766984524023 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470962032084 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0229764053341 0.12726935374 18% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0265759727734 0.0580467560999 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 52.3 8.37731958763 624% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -39.17 70.7449484536 -55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 22.9 3.82989690722 598% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 33.4 7.45979381443 448% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 37.55 8.71597938144 431% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 7.59969072165 121% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 80.0 8.62886597938 927% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 25.6 8.54432989691 300% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 26.0 8.15463917526 319% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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