You have received a bill from a mobile phone company for international call charges relating to a time when you did not use your phone for international call. Write a letter to company
Complaining about this
Giving your reasons
Asking for bill to be changed
Dear Sir,
I am writing to complain you about the excess phone bill for the month of april for my number 8872605060. The company have added extra 6000 rupees in my total bill as an international call charges, where I have never called.
I am registered with your company from the last three years where I use my number just for the local calls and messages. So, I am sure that definitely there is an error in bill sent to me. Also i have checked my call history online which is totally opposite to the bill sent to me.
I request you to please check into the matter once so that I can get details of my actual bill. I hope you will go through my account details and do the needful.
Thanking you for your consideration.
Regards,
Rupinder Singh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing to complain you about the excess phone bil...
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Line 2, column 40, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... I am writing to complain you about the excess phone bill for the month of apri...
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Line 2, column 67, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...you about the excess phone bill for the month of april for my number 8872605060....
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Line 3, column 82, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e last three years where I use my number just for the local calls and messages. S...
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Line 3, column 190, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...y there is an error in bill sent to me. Also i have checked my call history online w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 612.0 937.175257732 65% => OK
No of words: 140.0 206.0 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37142857143 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.43979062825 3.78020617076 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38532931026 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 127.690721649 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635714285714 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 189.0 290.88556701 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0732689116 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.0 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5555555556 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.888888888889 4.34317383033 20% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353384928164 0.216113520407 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137573445272 0.0766984524023 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100155650314 0.0603063233224 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231317669031 0.12726935374 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10027141263 0.0580467560999 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.77 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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