Some people argue that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others believe that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Although some individuals believe that it is a good idea to change miserable situations such as an unpleasant job or low wages, some others opine that it is better to accept it. Both groups have some rational reasons which will be discussed in the following.
As some reasons to support the last view, two main reasons have been mentioned. Firstly, changes might be risky and unpredictable. To exemplify, individuals should spend more time and money to upgrade their businesses. However, on some occasions, they might go bankrupt and lose their money. Moreover, this group of people believes that is their destiny. In fact, they mention that people would not be able to change some conditions in life as such conditions are not in their hands. In fact, people do not have enough capability to tackle some severe situations.
Nevertheless, some other individuals agree with the former view. To put forward their idea, firstly, they think that everybody is responsible for his or her life. Indeed, people are able to change any miserable conditions, as everybody is able to change his or her life in case, they make an effort. In addition, people should try to uplift their life, otherwise, they would encounter some issues. To take an example, people who receive a low income, are always struggling with poverty. Moreover, they might suffer from depression and anxiety as they are not able to provide for their family’s necessities.
To conclude, although in some cases, people might fail to change their life, in my opinion, everybody should make an attempt to upgrade his or her life. In fact, failure is the key to success.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, thus, in addition, in fact, such as, as a matter of fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1529.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86942675159 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49034200836 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515923566879 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0753761697 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.933333333 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9333333333 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.86666666667 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178855679579 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0648747797689 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535914208695 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125674254251 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0752962615877 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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