You have recently bought some furniture. It was broken when you received it. Write a complaint letter to the store manager and say
- What and when did you buy
- Why was it broken
- Suggest how the problem could be solved
Dear sir/madam,
I had ordered a 7-seater sofa from the wood pecker branch at Besant Nagar on 15th august,2019 and it was delivered at my residence on 17th august, 2019. When I opened the package of the delivered items,I found the furniture broken.
I had informed the branch when I paid the deposit amount, to take care when it would be packed since it was a delicate piece of furniture. The furniture needs to be assembled at my premises by an assembler specialist. The parts are broken due to the carelessness of the person while loading and unloading it from the truck. The reckless driving of the truck is also one of the reasons it was broken. Now the furniture is not fit to be assembled since the legs are broken, the photos of the defective pieces of the furniture is attached. It is consuming space in my house and is of no use right away.
I suggest that either to take back the furniture and refund the amount or send the delivery personal back to my address which is mentioned in the attachment. Please take back the defective one and replace it with a proper one.
I have been using the furniture’s from woodpecker for 5 years and never before have faced a situation like this. I am highly dissatisfied with the services provided. Please provide a speedy solution for this issue.
Best regards,
Shafaquat
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 83, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'august 2019'.
Suggestion: august 2019
...d pecker branch at Besant Nagar on 15th august,2019 and it was delivered at my residence on...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 140, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'august 2019'.
Suggestion: august 2019
...t was delivered at my residence on 17th august, 2019. When I opened the package of the deliv...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 202, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...pened the package of the delivered items,I found the furniture broken. I had in...
^^
Line 4, column 325, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...oading and unloading it from the truck. The reckless driving of the truck is also o...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.48453608247 200% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1101.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 236.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66525423729 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6863838683 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580508474576 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 351.9 290.88556701 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5031211339 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.6428571429 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8571428571 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.07142857143 4.34317383033 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.49484536082 468% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137232677705 0.216113520407 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0444416920837 0.0766984524023 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051115290399 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0698125391947 0.12726935374 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569939759825 0.0580467560999 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.