You have recently bought a toy online and after receiving it you discovered a problem with it. Write a letter to the online store you bought it from and say:
- Describe the toy
- explain the problem
- suggest how it could be solved
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to regretfully inform you about an issue with my recent purchase from your online store. The item delivered yesterday and unfortunately, I extremely dissatisfied with it because of the issues I have outlined below.
I had ordered was a battery operated red Disney figurine last Thursday. It was meant to be a gift for my son's upcoming birthday next month. However, on unwrapping the package, I found a hairline crack across the face of the action figure. Moreover, the toy seemed used and refurbished. Furthermore, the toy seemed to be non-functional. Initially, I presumed that there could be an issue with batteries but it refused to work even on replacing the batteries with new ones.
I am incredibly disappointed with your quality check, shipping and delivery process. Therefore, I believe that your prestigious organization should rectify this issue immediately by collecting and replacing the delivered doll with a brand new functioning model. Please call or revert to arrange a mutually convenient time for delivery.
Hoping to receive a prompt and favourable response.
Yours sincerely,
Praneet K Nadar
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 981.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33152173913 4.54256449028 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07225814102 2.54303337028 121% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.690217391304 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6753636382 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.4615384615 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1538461538 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15384615385 4.34317383033 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169825986065 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.049185066376 0.0766984524023 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629320121692 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0921691782834 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.074615084755 0.0580467560999 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 70.7449484536 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.04 8.71597938144 150% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 7.59969072165 126% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 41.2886597938 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.