You have recently changed your job and started working for a new company.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter:
explain why you changed your previous job
describe your new job
tell him/her your other news
Dear Mick,
I hope this letter finds you in the best of your health. It has been a long time since we last met. I wanted to let you know that I have left my previous employer and moved to Dubai on this new work assignment with a multinational company.
If you remember I told you the last time we had a telephonic conversation that I was looking for a change as the current job was becoming monotonous but since I have made this shift I feel that this will be a great move as it helps me to gain international experience and broaden my skill set. The new job also involves a lot of travel around the middle east and Europe thus it will also enable me to build a strong networking with my customers and partners.
Apart from this, I will also be visiting Russia in mid-December for work and it will be a great chance to meet you and explore Moscow with you. I am sure you will be a great host.
I look forward to meeting you soon.
Warm wishes
vinshu
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mick, I hope this letter finds you in the best...
^^^^^
Line 11, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ard to meeting you soon. Warm wishes vinshu
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, thus, apart from, i feel, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 782.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.22702702703 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42491330337 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.0462835453 44.8134815571 188% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8888888889 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5555555556 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 4.34317383033 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200861601425 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775282357269 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682736565084 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118995172445 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.069328975905 0.0580467560999 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.25 8.71597938144 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.