You have recently purchased a gift item for one of your friends.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter,
• tell him/her about the gift
• tell how you want to sent the gift to this friend
• explain why you chose this gift for your friend
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Varleen,
I was thinking of purchasing One plus 9 pro Mobile phone as a gift for Sarbans. The stock is available here in Mumbai stores and I’m aware of the unavailability of this product there in Hyderabad hence planning to purchase it. It surely is a masterpiece and I’m sure she’ll love it!
I’ve heard many positive reviews of this smart phone infact I was thinking of buying one for myself as well. After acquiring it, I shall courier it to her address. What do you think of Blue Dart courier service? I’ve heard it’s superfast!
Do you think she will love this phone? I know she’s a fitness freak and keeps her phone in handy for all her workouts and diet apps. Imagine her entire fitness world in such a small device! She might as well download all apps and post her daily routines on her social media platforms.
Can’t wait to send her this bundle of happiness!
Yours friendly
Manjyot.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 52, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Mobile) must be used with a third-person verb: 'phones'.
Suggestion: phones
...ing of purchasing One plus 9 pro Mobile phone as a gift for Sarbans. The stock is ava...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 52, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'phone' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'phones'.
Suggestion: phones
...ing of purchasing One plus 9 pro Mobile phone as a gift for Sarbans. The stock is ava...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 771.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73006134969 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39328290822 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.674846625767 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 224.1 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.706000388 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.6666666667 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1111111111 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.11111111111 4.34317383033 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213069862938 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853946547023 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599436120424 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0989686911732 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0148208699937 0.0580467560999 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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