Nowadays, many families have both parents working. Some working parents believe that other family members can take care of their children, while others think childcare centers are better. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Mothers and fathers are having full time jobs in most families. Some people argue that unemployed family members can take good care of children of employed parents while others believe that daycare centers can do a better job at the same. This essay will discuss both viewpoints and provide an opinion as to why other family members are better at taking care of children than childcare centers.
First of all, many working parents think that their children will do better in terms of societal norms with daycare. Because the child learns to become more social at these centers, parents agree that they serve as a good option. For instance, children from different family backgrounds and cultures gather at daycares which means that every child learns many new things from one another through interactions thereby making them social. In short, children start acquiring social skills at such places.
Second of all, other parents who work full time trust their children's safety with close family members. People mostly feel that their children are more secure with family members since they are aware of each other. A study in US stated that about 83% of children perceive a sense of protection with a known member rather than strangers. Hence, it is important that under the absence of parents, children feel comfortable.
To sum up, some working parents rely on family members and some on daycare centers. Both viewpoints are valid and depend from person to person, however, my opinion inclines more towards children's welfare and security which is dependent with family members rather than childcare centers as the child is not only safe but can also acquire social skills with other family members as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, second, so, well, while, as to, for instance, in short, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1170212766 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27203150431 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578014184397 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.234822945 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.3 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.452707888224 0.244688304435 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.174925849879 0.084324248473 207% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127882916117 0.0667982634062 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.282456241304 0.151304729494 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106468871258 0.056905535591 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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