You have recently read an article in the newspaper about someone you know personally. You found that some information is wrong.
Write a letter to the editor to inform him about it. In your letter, write:
what the article is about
what the error is
what you expect the editor to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to complain about the error your newspaper made on page 3, column 9, the article about the bravery award given to my friend Rahul by the chief minister of Punjab on 23rd May 2019.
As we know, Rahul played a significant role in the saving of minor girls from trafficking at the Amritsar railway station. Proud to mention, he is my school friend, and we had our entire schooling together in D.A.V institution. On his courageous action, the Hindu newspaper covered his interview about the event and published on page 3.
But unfortunately, his surname mentioned in the article is wrong, it should be Malhotra instead of Dhawan. I regret to inform you that the whole paper coverage taking the credit away from him, which is unfair for the brave person like him.
I want to request you to repost the article again with the correction. Moreover, consider improving the position of the column in the newspaper. At the bottom of the front page would be the right place.
I hope you will opt for a prompt reply.
Yours faithfully
John Wick
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 18, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: ,  
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to complain abou...
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Line 5, column 214, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: V
...ad our entire schooling together in D.A.V institution. On his courageous action, ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 980.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02564102564 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8145578161 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 16.3608247423 196% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.0713182593 44.8134815571 212% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 163.333333333 76.5299724578 213% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 32.5 16.8248392259 193% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 4.34317383033 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158234388358 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732368502863 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699927564859 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0870951115566 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565911613727 0.0580467560999 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 8.37731958763 221% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.92 70.7449484536 79% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 7.45979381443 180% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.49 8.71597938144 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 8.62886597938 203% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.8 8.54432989691 173% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 8.15463917526 233% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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