You have recently read an article in the newspaper about someone you know personally. You found that some information is wrong.
Write a letter to the editor to inform him about it. In your letter, write:
• what the article is about
• what the error is
• what you expect the editor to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Rakesh Soni, resident of South Mumbai and I am writing about an article I read in your newspaper dated 25th March and was a great read but would like to tell you that it has some incorrect information and facts.
Let me explain in detail. The article which I read in your newspaper is based on biography of our greatest legend cricketer Sachin Tendulkar and I am one of his admirer for his achievements in his sports career. First of all, I must state that article is quite interesting and it gave many insights right from his childhood sports career to his mammoth achievements just before his retirement. However, I was daunted to notice some blunders in the article that I deem should not have been overlooked.
The fact that he completed his first One Day international Century in 1996 against England is incorrect. He actually achieved this milestone two years before i.e. 1994 against Pakistan. Moreover he is not Matriculation failed student, but he has successfully completed his High School without any kind of backlogs.
I wish follow-up article or an editorial correction should clarify these issues as soon as possible.
Yours faithfully,
Rakesh Soni
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... some incorrect information and facts. Let me explain in detail. The article wh...
^^^
Line 7, column 187, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...ears before i.e. 1994 against Pakistan. Moreover he is not Matriculation failed student,...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, however, if, look, moreover, so, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1010.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97536945813 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76399897954 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.665024630542 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.5241176972 44.8134815571 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 4.34317383033 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166347419807 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055162062272 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077609358469 0.0603063233224 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106837456721 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106909967333 0.0580467560999 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 8.37731958763 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 8.71597938144 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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