You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child.
Write a letter to the parents. In your letter
explain why you would like the job
give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ
say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter with reference to the advertisement that was published in an Australian magazine. I understand the job posting is about short term live-in caregiver for your six year old child and I would like to apply for the same.
Firstly, let me explain the reasons why I would like the job. I am a fresh graduate from a journalism university and want to pursue my career in Australia. I am currently unemployed and would be needing a place to stay in Australia while looking for job. This job would be perfect for me as I love kids and will get a roof over my head.
In addition to the above, I am confident I am suitable for the job as I have relevant experience in this field. I have done some part time baby sitting jobs during my college tenure to earn pocket money for my expenditures. Also, I have been part of social services group which focuses on providing baby sitting facilities to working couples. I have more than 6 years of experience in handling kids less than 10 year old.
By the way, I had visited Australia during my internship time and loved the cuisine. I would be spending most of my free time in exploring Australia's culture and cuisine. I am looking forward to your response.
Yours faithfully,
Maddy
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 192, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ia. I am currently unemployed and would be needing a place to stay in Australia while look...
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Line 4, column 129, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...erience in this field. I have done some part time baby sitting jobs during my college ten...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, look, so, while, in addition, by the way, with reference to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1029.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 228.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51315789474 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65951184088 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59649122807 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 326.7 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.9272076062 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.5 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2857142857 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78571428571 4.34317383033 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27347515779 0.216113520407 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0898330999726 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0780904529459 0.0603063233224 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173071601168 0.12726935374 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122029871756 0.0580467560999 210% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.