You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter
1. say where you think you left the papers
2. explain why they are so important
3. tell the manager what you want him/her to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to request your help in retrieving some of the important documents that I had mistakenly left in your Begumpet Hotel branch last Thursday. I am Madhulika, finance executive of Ziya company and had attended Impact of Economy in Private Sector conference conducted previous week.
Let me first provide details where I believe left the documents in the hotel. I remember that I had the documents with me when we were being escorted to the Lotus banquet hall. I am not sure about the row number of my seat location however, the documents must have fallen down from my lap when I left the hall for lunch.
Adding further to the above, I would like to tell you that the documents are of utmost importance to me and my company. The papers are the financial report of the company performance this quarter and are extremely confidential. The papers are inside a sealed yellow envelope marked "Private". They need to be presented in the upcoming management meeting which will be held next week.
Lastly, I would like you to check with your lost and found department if they have received any sealed yellow envelope and conduct a thorough search in the Lotus banquet hall. Also, if the documents are found, could you please call me in my mobile number. I had entered my mobile number in the register at the reception counter during registration process. I am extremely sorry for the inconvenience that I am causing to you.
Yours Sincerely,
Madhulika Banerji
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 61, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...tter to request your help in retrieving some of the important documents that I had mistaken...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, lastly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1255.0 937.175257732 134% => OK
No of words: 259.0 206.0 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84555984556 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76624153802 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579150579151 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 399.6 290.88556701 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2560681191 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6428571429 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.57142857143 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270475609786 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0793738516271 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505656927607 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145833950402 0.12726935374 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432608615377 0.0580467560999 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 41.2886597938 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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