You have seen an advertisement for a community college that needs teachers for night classes.
Write a letter to the community college. In your letter:
• say which advertisement you are answering
• describe which course(s) you want to teach, and what it/they would be about
• explain why you would be a suitable teacher
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter with regards to the opportunity to educate Hindi language in your community college. I have seen this advertisement in The Daily magazine last Monday.
I am graduated in Hindi from Bharat University, London in 2002, aftermath I have been teaching Hindi language and correlation with other languages to primary students in Sofia College. I would like to teach the same courses in your community college during night shift, as you have many Indian students there in the society. This course will help them to learn and write in Hindi literature for their higher studies purpose.
Further, in order to utilize my time and to fund my daily needs, I am highly interested to join this job. I have also done Linguistic courses from Sun College last year which adds more points to my eligibility. Therefore, my qualification and appropriate experience make me more suitable for this job. I also assure the quality of teaching and better results.
I look forward to hear from you.
Yours sincerely,
Vishal
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter with regards to...
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Line 3, column 186, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...s to primary students in Sofia College. I would like to teach the same courses in...
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Line 5, column 16, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...ing and better results. I look forward to hear from you. Yours sincerely, Vishal ...
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Line 7, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rd to hear from you. Yours sincerely, Vishal
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Line 8, column 7, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r from you. Yours sincerely, Vishal
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 870.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67655716374 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626436781609 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6355304495 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0909090909 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8181818182 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.63636363636 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249801226371 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.085843512324 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653496828593 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139641486574 0.12726935374 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473216893076 0.0580467560999 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 8.71597938144 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.