In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In various nations, the people are widely affected in terms of health level by consuming excess junk food items and the number is increasing continuously. It is argued by some individuals that the state must execute higher duties against these foods items. I disagree to some extent because this action will have less impact on rich individuals.
To begin with, imposing high duties can curb health problems by limiting people from eating these junk food items. Many economical people will limit themselves to a certain extent from eating junk foods after the price hike in these consumer goods. Therefore, health problems can be minimized to some level. A recent survey from the Nutrition department revealed that the majority of the health risks are associated with junk food consumption, thus curbing people from eating these fast food items via increasing tax can control health problems.
However, the wealthy individuals will not be affected by this action of government, therefore alternatives like awareness on diet and exercise are important to minimize health complications. Side effects of more intake of these hazardous foods need to be addressed by the state to their people and the importance of daily exercise can change the lifestyle of people and minimize their health difficulties. Hence, to take care of all the people of the nation, the government must include these parameters also to limit health problems in society.
In conclusion, while, increasing taxes will limit lower-income people from purchasing junk food products, I believe we should educate people on their food intake capacity and the benefits of daily workout in their life to control emerging health problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...have less impact on rich individuals. To begin with, imposing high duties can ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, so, therefore, thus, while, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31851851852 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66647118625 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.7693104363 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.545454545 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5454545455 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.45454545455 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315089046382 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131795446072 0.084324248473 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480463616347 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197394216228 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558250158042 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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