You have seen an advertisement in an English newspaper for a job working in the City Museum shop during the holidays. You decide to apply for the job.
Write a letter to the director of the Museum. In your letter,
introduce yourself
explain what experience and special skills you have
explain why you are interested in the job
Dear Sir,
I am writing to apply for the job in the City Museum Shop during this holidays. I had recently reviewed your advertisement over “Times of India” newspaper for the desired post. As you require a temporary volunteer for the Museum Shop to manage the tourists, we would be a great match as I want to work and grab some professional skills during my free days.
Moreover, I have passed out my Post Graduation Course in Tourism Industry thus I will be able to work in much effective way. I always feel enchanted grabbed with historical things. To add more, during my last holidays I had worked for the same in “Campa Museum - Chicago”. That was the wonderful experience which makes me learned effective communication skills, interpersonal skills, managing number of things at once and more. This will be really helpful to you as well if I would be given this opportunity.
Furthermore, I am really fascinated with such kind of profession as its my passion to be in this industry with such kind of work. It really gives me mesmerising experience wherever I am surrounded with such environment. However, I really want to pass my leisure days with such job.
I am attaching my Resume along with the letter so that you can have a better idea regarding my expertise and desired qualification.
Waiting for your favorable response,
Thanks and Regards
Priyanka
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 66, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... the job in the City Museum Shop during this holidays. I had recently reviewed your ...
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Line 5, column 247, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...st holidays I had worked for the same in 'Campa Museum - Chicago'. That...
^^
Line 7, column 69, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...cinated with such kind of profession as its my passion to be in this industry with ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, really, regarding, so, thus, well, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1168.0 937.175257732 125% => OK
No of words: 234.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99145299145 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97635163935 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606837606838 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 290.88556701 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4672947105 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8461538462 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216989176323 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078569004697 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0766297681198 0.0603063233224 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127250535486 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0926833143326 0.0580467560999 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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