You have a spare room in your apartment. You would like to rent it out to a college student. Write a letter to the student accommodation officer at a local college. Describe apartment, Why you rent it out, Kind of tenant looking for.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter in response of your advertisement published on 12th march in the city's local newspaper regarding requirment of rooms for students. I would appreciate if you could arrange a tenant for my extra room.
I have a large apartment in the South Wales, which is near to your university as well. my flat is situated at third floor and having enough space to live in .it has 200 squres metres area in which three bedrooms with ensuite facilities got constructed with a beautiful view of sea too. In addition, there are state of art furniture and other appliances : a dishwasher, and an electric cooker . I am a retired army officer and my family not residing with me due to some family dispute thus i thought to rent it out for someone .
All basic amenities are available in my flat therefore i fixed $200 for a week and $500 in advance before signing a rent deed , which is requisite as per the policy of university.The tenant must be mature and sensible.As i have asthama problem i would prefer a non-smoker for my room and a studious and dedicated to study student is my first choice of selection. Furthermore, i would appreciate if you could provide this type of prospective tenant for my room.
I look forward to hearing you soon.
Yours Sincerely,
Jagjit.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, look, regarding, so, therefore, third, thus, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1080.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 228.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73684210526 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80821529218 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65350877193 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 341.1 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.8861668926 44.8134815571 207% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 108.0 76.5299724578 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8 16.8248392259 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 4.34317383033 198% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 2.54639175258 550% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267220913812 0.216113520407 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100490219525 0.0766984524023 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064512539534 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161327521513 0.12726935374 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450187155756 0.0580467560999 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 8.37731958763 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.