You live in a room in college which you share with another student.
However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it
very difficult to work.
Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter
• describe the situation (your current accommodation)
• explain your problems and why it is difficult to work
• say what kind of accommodation you would prefer
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am an international student of computer science living in the campus dormitory sharing a room with another student. However, I am experiencing some difficulties with the cooling equipment and my roommate. Because of these issues, I would like to ask whether I could change my room.
Currently, I am a resident of Edison dormitory which its rooms’ conditions are almost the same. My place is a 35 square feet room located at second floor equipped with a central air conditioner. Moreover, I have a roommate who is a second-year student of biology. Unfortunately, there are some problems needing to be addressed.
My roommate’s behavior is utterly annoying. It makes it almost impossible for me to study. He always used to walk and read out loud which is too disturbing for me to concentrate. In addition, he used to hold parties in our room without considering my study plan. Another main problem that I am dealing with is the functionality of air conditioner. It is out of work almost whenever we need it. In hot seasons, the cooler is often malfunctioning, consequently the room temperature becomes unbearable especially when both of us are present in the room. Inevitably, I am considering switching my room.
I would like to enquire about moving to another place. I tend to study in quiet and cold environments. So, I prefer going to a building which is equipped with a modern working air conditioning facility. And also, I would rather have a considerate roommate who is studying the same major as mine.
As my career depends on this matter, I would appreciate a reply as soon as possible.
Yours faithfully,
Mogahdasi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... as soon as possible. Yours faithfully, Mogahdasi
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, if, moreover, second, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 937.175257732 147% => OK
No of words: 280.0 206.0 136% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93214285714 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13283914724 2.54303337028 123% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 127.690721649 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 290.88556701 152% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.13402061856 197% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 12.6804123711 166% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.7874727889 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.7619047619 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3333333333 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 4.34317383033 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.94845360825 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157893028488 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0433929547422 0.0766984524023 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417786981618 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0847640534287 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401064487099 0.0580467560999 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 70.7449484536 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.72 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 41.2886597938 182% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.