Cutting down forests is a real environmental threat; yet, this is still happening at a great rate around the world.
Why do you think forests are being destroyed?
Are there any benefits from the destructions of forests?
Nowadays deforestation has become a global issue and it is threatening our planet. Unfortunately, destruction of forest is happening non-stop all over the world. In this essay reasons that forests are being destroyed and its consequences are critically discussed
The prime suspect which is human being uses wood as one of the main construction materials. Many houses and buildings are made of wood, we provide the required goods by cutting down trees and producing our desired construction material. In my country many parts of apartments are made of wooden material such as cardboard, walls and doors. The required wood is mainly achieved by destroying forests.
In some areas where are near jungles wood is main source of energy households cut down trees and prime them into their oven or other heating devices. Factories burn trunks of trees to produce energy to run their facilities. In northern part of Iran ancient forests are permanently destroyed due to abuse of this valuable resource by factories and local people.
I believe there is little benefit in deforestation and it costs us more than it provides. One of the main consequences of destroying forests would be global warming by eliminating trees from life cycle of Earth, we are emitting one of the most important sources of greenhouse gases absorption. As a result, more solar energy will be trapped in Earth's atmosphere which leads to a warmer planet
Furthermore, forests are like lungs for Earth, they act as air purifiers and convert CO2 to oxygen, their roots prevent winds to create dusty storms. So, if number of trees decreases obviously air quality will decrease drastically.
In conclusion, the main reasons behind forest destruction are construction materials and energy production. And it is believed that deforestation is a major threat to our lives and there is little or no benefit permanent loss of trees.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 151, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[4]
Message: “So , if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s prevent winds to create dusty storms. So, if number of trees decreases obviously air...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1589.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15909090909 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87316016501 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594155844156 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1340443282 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.933333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5333333333 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.73333333333 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216423526367 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682876885912 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648294593853 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11316597102 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0663247251239 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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