Job satisfaction has always been one of most important factors of happy life for almost everyone. Although pursuing a the business of one’s interest can be much more rewarding, many prefer to opt for a salaried job to avoid the risks of being entrepreneur. This essay will elucidate the merits and demerits of working in a company.
On the one hand, getting employed in a company not only provides needed stability for life by ensuring job security and regular payments, but also ensures mental satisfaction. That is to say, in despite of self employed indivituals who should bear the risk of failing in making a profit in the competitive business market, employees can rest assured that they have monthly wages that pays for their livelihood. Moreover, people who own a business have lots of responsibilities and should take care of all actions of the company, while the employees are just in charge of specified responsibilities. This gives them peace of mind and keeps them away from heavy work load and mentall pressure. For instance, a secretary’s job is to organise office tasks and manager’s schedual only.
On the other hand, there are some draw backs for working as a part of work force. Namely, monetary issues and lossing innovativity. To start with, employees usually do not make a good living and it takes a long time for them to get payment increases. According to oxford university press, more than 50 % of workers in United states receive low salaries and if this trend continues, they will lose their motivation for work. In addition, working in a company doesn't allow an individual to be innovative in his field because the staff have to obey their superior authority. in the other word, there is no room for self expression in many work places.
In conclusion, while employment guarantees a stable income and a tranquil life, it slows down the financial progress and prevents individuals from being creative. This may causea disappoyment and job dissatisfaction.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: a; the
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Suggestion: draws
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to start with, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1667.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03625377644 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90245658812 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631419939577 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6550908626 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.1875 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6875 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1875 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127652077324 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0383798931465 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430712273883 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0756722866798 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333393285635 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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