Dear Sir/Ma'am,
Please consider that my shared accommodation is creating an obstruction in my work and studies. My room mate has many health problems, he is continuously falling sick , to top it off he keeps drinking to reduce the body pain. This results in him being inebriated most of the time and blabbering nonsense. Besides, he also brings in gang and dates to our room without fail. These people are bullies and behave rather in an uncouth manner. Another main issue is that he keeps watching television or listening to loud music, I have requested him to use his ear plugs, but he has turned deaf to these pleas.
At midnight, he has a tendency to snore too much and smoke if he is awake. Between the noise and the fumes I feel suffocated and sleep deprived. After all this if he falls sick he tends to puke and pass out, unfortunately I have to clear up his mess.
Most of our neighbours complain about him during the day, I have to bear the brunt of these accusations just because I live with him.
Please help me relocate to a room with a calmer and sober roommate, so that I can work, study and sleep peacefully.
Appreciate an early revert.
Thanks
Sincerely
Sabitha
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 167, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...roblems, he is continuously falling sick , to top it off he keeps drinking to redu...
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Line 3, column 417, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an uncouth manner" with adverb for "uncouth"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...se people are bullies and behave rather in an uncouth manner. Another main issue is that he keeps wa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, after all, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 987.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6338028169 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56451816688 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661971830986 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6940965608 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.9230769231 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3846153846 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46153846154 4.34317383033 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0884894824245 0.216113520407 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0278128718948 0.0766984524023 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0270436445151 0.0603063233224 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0470166899995 0.12726935374 37% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316045959408 0.0580467560999 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.