You live in a room in college which you share with another student.
However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it
very difficult to work.
Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter
describe the situation
explain your problems and why it is difficult to work
say what kind of accommodation you would prefer.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to bring to your attention the problem I am currently facing with my room-mate.
my name is Massie Williams and I live in room 23, block B in Trump hostel. The situation is that the student I share the room with like always come with his friends and party all night. they play their music on a high tempo, they scream and dance around every corner of the room.
this is affecting my study and my grades are dropping drastically. As a result of the constant parties, i find it very difficult to study. The noise from the music couple with the fact that they throughout the night has made it impossible to concentrate on learning; this showed on the recently concluded test as my score plummeted.
I would prefer a single room occupancy with no room-mate. A single size room furnished with bed, chair and a small desk, preferably in the hostel next to the student union government building.
I looking forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.
Yours faithfully,
Massie williams
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...liest convenience. Yours faithfully, Massie williams
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 866.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75824175824 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58643596641 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6109489724 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.7272727273 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5454545455 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.90909090909 4.34317383033 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242012791633 0.216113520407 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0835081504015 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482994584263 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125146166161 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264328467941 0.0580467560999 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.