Dear sir /madem
I am writing to you for your consideration regarding my one month leave, actually ,i am working in your renowned company as journal manager of the fiance department. Unfortunately, my father fall down on surface where they got injurious after fist aid I ran to the doctor who told me your father need knee surgery which would need one month particular care. I am living alone with my father that's why i will have to take care of them.
I will promptly response of the office mail and also check daily office report in order to keep me update about office happening as well as jashan nad manpreet who are also my co-partner in the new project they would complete it before completing deadlines.
I hope you will approve me a month leave from 1 April to 1 may ,I will great thankful to you in advance and waiting for your primitive response.
Yours faithfully,
xyz.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Suggestion: ,
...n regarding my one month leave, actually ,i am working in your renowned company as...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...regarding my one month leave, actually ,i am working in your renowned company as ...
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Suggestion: that's
... care. I am living alone with my father thats why i will have to take care of them. ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...m living alone with my father thats why i will have to take care of them. I wi...
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... mail and also check daily office report in order to keep me update about office ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...they would complete it before completing deadlines. I hope you will approve m...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...te it before completing deadlines. I hope you will approve me a month leave ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e me a month leave from 1 April to 1 may ,I will great thankful to you in advance ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, may, regarding, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 738.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64150943396 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53492670657 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.679245283019 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 231.3 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.8324411084 44.8134815571 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.0 76.5299724578 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 16.8248392259 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 4.34317383033 200% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273615266094 0.216113520407 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135473795019 0.0766984524023 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107549511005 0.0603063233224 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181873925789 0.12726935374 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126646745269 0.0580467560999 218% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 8.37731958763 164% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 70.7449484536 76% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 7.45979381443 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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