You organized a party for a 90th birthday party in a hotel for a relative; many elderly guests attended this party which is of great success.
Write a letter to thank the hotel manager. In your letter
give the details of the party
the reason why the party was so successful
mention things that helped you a lot/good service provided by the staff of the hotel
Dear Mr. Smith,
On the second floor of your hotel, we threw a huge birthday party for my ninety-year-old grandpa on Saturday, October 15.
Through your staff's effort, the party was extremely successful. In the first place, the food you served, especially the main course, roast lamb, is a good choice for elderly guests and the dessert, Tiramisu, is children's favorite. In addition, the emcee you provided was great for he could bring guests back to the precious memories as well as tell funny stories about my grandpa. He created an emotional, relaxed atmosphere for the party. Besides, the first-class service you offered was also a key to the success of the party. Moreover, waiters all the time walked around the hall without a rest to meet every guest's need, offering drink, plates, etc.
Lastly, I particularly give my thanks to a staff, Mr. Sajjad, for his big help. He hit on many brilliant ideas about the organization of the party, including decorating the hall, presenting my grandpa's old pictures and inviting surprising guests to bring the party to a climax.
To emphasize, please convey to him my deep appreciation and thanks for what he did.
Yours sincerely,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, lastly, moreover, second, so, well, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 995.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02525252525 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69824148125 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671717171717 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5248475724 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5 76.5299724578 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1 4.34317383033 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281775280162 0.216113520407 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0958570468086 0.0766984524023 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536976947241 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158257106512 0.12726935374 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.058405901407 0.0580467560999 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 8.37731958763 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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