Crime is a major issue in the world and many believe that nothing can be done to totally prevent it. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Provide relevant examples if necessary.
Nowadays the crime rate keeps increasing all over the world and this has been addressed as an extremely serious problem everywhere. A number of people claimed that it is impossible to completely stop criminal action. However, I completely disagree with this opinion due to the fact that, with effective laws and actions, it could be brought under control. In the subsequent paragraphs, I will discuss more about this in detail.
Primarily, criminals are not scared that they will get caught if they do something illegal and that is why crime is not being able to be stopped. To prevent it the government must provide numerous law enforcement forces within every communal area. Furthermore, this can potentially help the police to respond to the people nearby whenever there is any theft, murder or any other violent activities are being committed. Additionally, they can go for rounds every night in order to maintain a safe environment for the community and this might create a fear in thieves or murderers for committing any serious crime. For example, Sirugudi is a small village in Tamilnadu where many offenses were witnessed as there was not any police station in the surrounding. After higher officials decided to settle a station house in that area, faults that happened previously have reduced up to 50% and people find immensely safe habituating there.
Secondly, introducing new rules and regulations in society like increasing the years in prison, exposing them and their family members in public, cancelling their citizenship and so on. The laws should be framed in a way that offenders should be terrified to make a mistake. This can significantly help stop the major crime movements overall. Sanjana rape case is a definite example, where immediate judgement was given, and the culprit was hanged on the same day. This has definitely created a fear among the criminals.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that with proper new laws and active police forces in the city, major violent activities can be prevented from happening. The government must take serious actions on the criminals so that the public can feel a secure society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1805.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12784090909 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75013940058 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602272727273 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9530137573 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.176470588 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7058823529 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35294117647 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151486460935 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0438173388248 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426105414489 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0884385233828 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0261620016869 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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