You received your monthly gas bill and realized that you were overcharged for the last quarter. Upon further examination of the information on the gas bill, you realized that the gate of your house was not left unlocked for access to be granted for the meter reading to be checked.
Write a letter to your utilities board. Explain mentioned points.
•Describe the meter reading you saw on your bill and why you feel you were overcharged
•Explain why this information is wrong.
•Say what you would you like the utilities board to do.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction regarding the meter reading, which I saw on my gas bill of last month. My name is Riddham Patel and my customer identification number is CX15237.
On 15th October, I have received a monthly bill and I checked the bill. As per my perusal, your comany has been charging overly from me, even if I have not been using gas since last three months because I was out of town for work in this period.
After in-depth investigation, I came to know that the overly charged money is due to inability of your reading-collector to access the meter as the gate of my home was locked. The same reason of the penalty has also been mentioned on the received last month's bill and previous two bills.
In this case, I would like to draw your attention to my previously communicated letter, in which I had clearly mentioned that, since I would not be there at home, my house would have been locked and the meter reading would not be possible. I had also mentioned to charge me combinely for three months after I return to the home and the meter reading is taken by your person. I have attached the copy of the letter. I would like you to revoke the penalty levied on the last three bills by your company. Otherwise, I am having all rights to raise my concerns to legal authorities.
Waiting your positive response.
Yours Faithfully,
Riddham Patel.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 415, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...I have attached the copy of the letter. I would like you to revoke the penalty le...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1157.0 937.175257732 123% => OK
No of words: 255.0 206.0 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53725490196 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65512496529 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545098039216 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 361.8 290.88556701 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.9254078808 44.8134815571 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6153846154 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.76923076923 4.34317383033 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232645041047 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0865482368719 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611052138933 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128047944462 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510352565141 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.