Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
As a result of the Internet, the life of human has become convinient remarkably. This can be seen by observing the recently famed means of shopping, which is online shopping. This trend has surely more numbers of merits as compare to demerits. My opinion will be discussed by enlisting pros and cons of purchasing items over the Internet.
There are uncountable benefits of online shopping. Firstly, vast choices are available from numbers of e-commerce retailers. For instance, Flipkart and Amazon proffer profuse options for buying a smartphones. Secondly, customer's satisfaction to buy online is backed by the lucrative prices of items after application of frequently available promo codes, which allow huge discounts to be implemented. Lastly, there is no easier and more convinient option available to buy any item at home rather than online shopping that permit favourable purchasing without going out and wasting priceless time. For instance, even if people have tiredness after returning from work, they can purchase some essential groceries being at home only. Same way, there are many other advantages for purchasing products digitally.
On the dark side, there are also a few drawbacks. The critical one is risk of security breach. While shopping on the Internet, individuals have to provide their bank detail such as a credit card number and an internet banking password. Sharing such information can be prone to hacking by some - technically prudent but morally rugue - minds though such risks have been mitigated through implementation of antiphising softwares. In addition, the online shopping has decreased the amount of jobs at some extent by lowering the importance of local shops; local vendors, however, have alleviated this drawback by transiting their part of business to online steram only.
To conclude, it can clearly be postulated that demerits of online shopping are not that much of worrying. Neverthless, the merits are highly intensive and more in numbers. It might not be surprise that the mode of traditional shopping at showrooms for some product would completely get extinct.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1785.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3765060241 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82908150757 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623493975904 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.2876637395 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9473684211 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4736842105 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52631578947 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170143584968 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0479210667437 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400861745801 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100393756806 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0180178084419 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.