Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.
Which viewpoint do you agree with?
It is the fact that advertisement plays a vital role to promote the sales of any new product even for genuine goods also. It is believed by a few people that promotion encourages the purchase of 'extra' goods. On the other hand, there is also a sect in society, of the opinion that new products having the capability of improving human life are introduced by means of advertisements. This essay will decipher both the views before reaching to a decent conclusion.
More and more products are hitting the market on regular basis and newer advertising materials are frequently seen at shops and supermarkets. Nowadays in this modern era, these advertising hoardings are beautifully designed with the aid of computers and printing machines. Additionally, primary promotions usually comprise gigantic discounts. As a result, customers get attracted and inspired by themselves to have promoted vain produces bought. For instance, newly launched furniture is advertised with awsome photos and offered a big discount. Customers make their mind to replace the furniture of their home with good condition.
On the other hand, sometimes advertisements also bring a notice of consumers at products of good values capable to improve quality of lives. For goods with new and updated features promotions are necessary to grab the attention of people, For instance, mobile phones and computers, when primarily got into the market, no one was aware of the useful features, which later on proved to be very useful in the present.
To conclude, in most cases, advertisements boost sales of many useless products but some good quality products also require to be promoted for the betterment of human lives.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 117, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
... any new product even for genuine goods also. It is believed by a few people that pr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for instance, as a result, in most cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1423.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23161764706 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89105968512 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617647058824 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0132282253 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.461538462 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9230769231 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162618170904 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0563499892389 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382379079979 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102646045869 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0122578949764 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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