you recently attend a meeting at a hotel. when you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.
say where you think you left papers
explain why they are so important
tell the manager what you want him/her to do
Dear Sir. Or Madam;
I am writing with regard to some vital documents that I have misplaced in the room I stayed in at your hotel last week. One of my colleagues and I were at your hotel to have a meeting with our company consultant, Dr. Norbert Czech, from 24th to 26th October.
My room number was 718 on the 4th floor and I think that I forgot to collect all my stuff before checking out since our meeting finished at 11 AM and our flight was at 2 PM, so we had to leave the hotel in hurry. Certainly, they are in the room, perhaps in the drawer that was placed beside my bed.
As I mentioned, those papers are considered important and if any of our opponents access them, a huge amount of our crucial data will be public, which brings a new set of concerns. They include some important information about most of the ongoing projects. Most of them are original test reports and unfortunately, there is not any copy of them.
Now, I am writing to ask if you are so kind as to check the room to see if those documents are there or they might be collected by cleaning staff. Please give me a call once you have them. I arrange someone to collect them for me or perhaps I fly to receive it personally.
I hope my request will not inconvenience you too much.
Thank you in advance for your cooperation.
Yours sincerely,
Yalda Asgari.
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| 2019-11-02 | yaldaasgari | 73 | view |
| 2019-11-02 | yaldaasgari | 73 | view |
| 2019-11-02 | yaldaasgari | 73 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, as to, i think, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1112.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 253.0 206.0 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.395256917 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48496863781 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 127.690721649 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596837944664 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 339.3 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.3896456564 44.8134815571 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5384615385 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4615384615 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.92307692308 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215874755958 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709928145411 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673020936682 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121266283442 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548184414501 0.0580467560999 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.24 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 8.62886597938 197% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.