Since ancient times humans have tendency to work hard to avail maximum benefits out of limited resources. Despite of living in smart era, some people still prefer to work for long hours at cost of losing fun time for leisure activities. However, without knowing what is more advantageous, it's blind path to follow. Therefore, in this essay, we will evaluate various circumstances to ascertain which is more beneficial and thus we can implement better lifestyle.
True, present situations and competition demands more of our personal time leaving no or little space for any other hobbies. Whereas, with current technology and globalisation there is no need for us to allocate late nights and weekends to regular business hours. For instance, ubiquitous internet facilities enabling us to attend all important meetings from remote places. As this being the case,there is no necessity of travelling long distances to participate in conferences. Instead, we can enjoy that period with our family members and beloved one while working on a computer. On the other hand, psychologists warning us to be careful with stress created by extended work periods. Our brains are designed and mechanised only to tolerate certain level of pressure created by monotonous jobs. When it crosses beyond we can comprehend, there are chances for side-effects like hallucinations and increase in blood pressure. As a result, those who earn from extra work will end up in spending for hospitals. Apart, current era condescends people who spend more time in office as undisciplined work manners. In other words, only those people work more time who are unable to finish their tasks in time which is a sign of incapability. Now a days smart thing to do is to complete all work in less span of time.
Besides, employers who are making their employees to work more than 8 hours a day are risking themselves by crossing limits laid down by law. As per guidelines issued by 'Ministry of labour and World Economic Forum it's against to human rights to force labourers beyond their capacity. Especially, before asking a women to work on late nights it's duty of organiser to arrange for sufficient security for health and safety of working women. Moreover, it's unprofessional to ask for stretching office hours when workers are reluctant to do so. Ofcourse, no one blames for an occasional siphoning off their own time to attend important job. For example, to request staff members to be present on financial year end to achieve their targets is a healthy and welcoming gesture. Nevertheless, it becomes problem only when once in blue moon project is everyday habbit. Exactly, here we should drawline before we become oblivion under work pressure.
After lengthy and elaborative discussions, we can safely conclude the topic by saying that for maintaining work-life balance it's vital to enjoy our life along by maintaining disciplined work settings. In my opinion, using our valuable time for fun and leisure games is equally important and it's advantages outweigh disadvantages. Hence we should recommend all human recourses department to include strict and punctual work timings as part of standard operating procedures.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, hence, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, thus, whereas, while, for example, for instance, as a result, in my opinion, in other words, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 82.0 41.998997996 195% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2682.0 1615.20841683 166% => OK
No of words: 517.0 315.596192385 164% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18762088975 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76839952204 4.20363070211 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83740880706 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 309.0 176.041082164 176% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597678916828 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 847.8 506.74238477 167% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 16.0721442886 168% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.9072538028 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.3333333333 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1481481481 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.37037037037 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307762856567 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0760961570572 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639327369976 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188708275638 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578396177666 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 162.0 78.4519038076 206% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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