You recently bought a washing machine that doesn’t work the way you expected.
Write a letter to the shop. In your letter
Describe what is wrong with the washing machine . Complain about the poor service Say what action you would like the shop to take
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction with regards to the poor service I have received from your customer service desk. A few days ago, I purchased a Video-Con front loaded automatic washing machine from your store. At the moment, I am quite unhappy with its performance.
Last Tuesday, I bought the washing machine and it worked well for the first two days. On the third day, when I switched it on, it continuously produced a beep sound and went off. I phoned your shop and spoke to the sales supervisor on duty named Mr. Peter. He promised me that he will send a technician to my home to fix this issue. I called your store again and again, unfortunately the response was same. It has been three days now I have called and waiting for your reply. Is this the kind of service your shop is famed for?
As you are aware, a dissatisfied customer can badmouth your business, I courteously request you to send your staff to fix this issue at the earliest. I would appreciate if you could replace this washing machine with a new one if possible. I would be grateful if you could call me on 05523865 as soon as you receive this letter.
I look forward to hearing from you at the earliest.
Yours faithfully,
Steve
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Comments
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... as soon as you receive this letter. I look forward to hearing from you at the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, so, third, well, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1039.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 226.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59734513274 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62083272922 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597345132743 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9704244572 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.2666666667 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0666666667 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.73333333333 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296261013975 0.216113520407 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0913516518055 0.0766984524023 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700728268334 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166007577261 0.12726935374 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0722026968366 0.0580467560999 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.