You recently moved to a new apartment. Write to your friend and say
- Why did you move there
- Describe the new apartment
- Invite him/her to visit you
Dear James,
Hope you're doing fine. I am writing to let you know i that i have recently moved to a three bedroom apartment in lekki Phase 2.
The main reason we decided to move out of the old building is because we had a new-born baby. The house has become very small for us, so moving out to a bigger and spacious apartment was the only solution.
This new apartment is located in a very secure and serene environment in lekki. it is a three bedroom apartment with an ample of parking space, an interlocking tiles around every inch of the compound. Each room of the house are all ensuit, the sitting room and kitchen are well furnished with quality materials, and it is just 5 minutes away from my office.
I would be very grateful if you and your family can swing by next week. it will mean a lot to me, especially for the kids who haven't seen you for a long time.
I'm really looking forward to catching up with you,
Best Regards
Romeo Wincheter
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 6, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
Dear James, Hope youre doing fine. I am writing to let you kno...
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Line 6, column 81, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...secure and serene environment in lekki. it is a three bedroom apartment with an am...
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Line 6, column 161, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'tile'?
Suggestion: tile
...ample of parking space, an interlocking tiles around every inch of the compound. Each...
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Line 8, column 73, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...and your family can swing by next week. it will mean a lot to me, especially for t...
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Line 8, column 127, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
... lot to me, especially for the kids who havent seen you for a long time. Im really ...
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Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...who havent seen you for a long time. Im really looking forward to catching up w...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, really, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 790.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41340782123 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31479150891 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.698324022346 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.4795013083 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255830489129 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0885250343393 0.0766984524023 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677581077982 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134801948117 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0663518433381 0.0580467560999 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.0 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.