some people thinks that parent should teach children how to be good member of the society. Others, however believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
For decades, there have been a considerably debate to who should be more responsible for teaching children in becoming a good member of the society. Some folks believe that the parent should be responsible for this. While others, however, feels that school is the right place to achieve this. The moot question is, who should be liable, this essay will put both sides of this contentious matter into severe scrutiny and at the end i will give my viewpoint.
It is believed by some that parent should lecture and train their children on how to become a good member of the society. For example, parents should teach their children the difference between virtue and vice as well as behaviors that are acceptable to the society. There is a saying that charity begins at home and the first form of education any child receives is from their parent, if they are not properly nurtured at the early stages in their life before they become adults and can then decide things for themselves. We can all agree that due to lack of home upbringing, some children partake in some unspeakable crimes such as rape and other antisocial attitude. Thus, it is understandable while people think that parent should educate their child to be good members of the society.
On the other hand, other people believed that school is the right place for children to familiarize their selves with such characteristics. For example, disciplining and punishing them for any unsocial and unacceptable conduct. This might make the child to be humble and become a productive member of the society as some children as scared of detention, loads of extra homework. So a child which their parent really cant be bothered talking to and correcting can probably be changed by their teachers, due to the fact that maybe they are scared of their teachers more than their parents. Hence, that is why some believed that it is the duty of the school to mold them into a better citizens.
In conclusion looking at the above discussion, after carefully analyzing both sides. I believe that the proper upbringing of a child is of paramount significance to both the parent and the school, so i am of the opinion that both sides have a role to play, as a child belongs to the society but at the same time parent should be the front runner.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, look, may, really, so, then, thus, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1899.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 399.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75939849624 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5706883104 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483709273183 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 589.5 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3846998307 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.6875 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9375 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.125 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.379463050413 0.244688304435 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140345270144 0.084324248473 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0940373654467 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231954117439 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669038490117 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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