You recently ordered something online. When the delivery came it was not complete.
Write a letter to the company. In your letter:
explain what you ordered and what was missing from your delivery
explain the importance of this delivery
ask for a replacement item to be sent
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to express my displeasure with an incomplete order delivery.
The order was for a WIFI signal booster (Order # ABC12) ordered from your website on October 12th. The order should have come with the booster and a cable that connects it to the router, however, the cable is missing from the package.
Due to the existing lock down in place I am working from home and my internet speed is quite poor, which is why I had ordered this device to help improve my signal. My job involves dealing with real time client complaints which is why a stable and fast connection is critical for my work.
I expect a compatible cable that will work with the booster to be shipped via express delivery. If that is not possible, I would prefer to have a new package instead.
In view of the importance of this order, I expect a prompt response from your side.
Yours faithfully,
John Doe
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 757.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 162.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67283950617 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44258085065 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 127.690721649 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623456790123 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.190201816 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.1111111111 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.11111111111 4.34317383033 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177471148224 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0804105385325 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0796017376112 0.0603063233224 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103272472496 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0812451363445 0.0580467560999 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.