You recently organized an all day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter
1. Say what the participant liked about the hotel.
2. Explain why they were unhappy about the hotel.
3. Suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in futures.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to make you appraise about the feedback received from the members of recent meeting conducted at your hotel .Satisfaction level of the members was not up to the mark,This was not first meeting held at your hotel.We regularly conduct meetings at your hotel.
As discussed above,Members were very pleased at the welcome note and was expecting same type of service. Although the quality of the food was good but the quantity served was very less.Even more, service was very slow .Meeting was about to finish but snacks were not ready till he time. So this happened first time that ,this type of feed back is received from the team members.
In the above context, i must say that you have to work upon the same because you have corporate contract with our company. Otherwise there will be cancellation of contract. Moreover i will give my opinion that you should rather appoint expert and experienced employee on the service . So this area to be acted upon immediately to avoid any further escalation.
Expecting a prompt action from your side
Thanking you
Albert
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 945.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02659574468 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50361290966 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654255319149 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.5745316453 44.8134815571 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 76.5299724578 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8888888889 16.8248392259 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 2.54639175258 982% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258552378724 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748153053293 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0993609737188 0.0603063233224 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133559150081 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120628171318 0.0580467560999 208% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 8.37731958763 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.