Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Penal action is must to be taken against the culprit in order to teach a lesson for whole life.There are numerous penal actions listed as per law against the defaulters . Many people think that there should be be fixed punishment while others
assert that it should be consider according to the situation and reason for crime. This essay will put light on this subject and along with my personal opinion.
To begin with,punishment should be fixed for different type of crimes. If the penal action is pre decided and permanent it will discourage and frightened the person before committing a wrong task. Even, this would help in diminishing the chance of favoritism.Because if the things are predetermined then there is less chance of personal biasness.For an instance, judgement will not depend upon the situation of the case rather if the person proved as victim then he would have to bear the predetermined penal action against him. Further more, person who has committed any offence is liable for strict action although same is done in extreme condition. For instance, all the terror activities are good in the eyes of those people which are done as part of religion , but as per laws these are illegal. Thus firm action must be for any fault.
On the flip side, penal actions are decided by human being ,so the severity of the situation must be considered. Final action must considered by taking all the pros and cons of the circumstances. For an instance, If a person is killed by a women to avoid the rape, it does not mean that she deserve the same punishment.
In the end it can be concluded that punishment must be predetermined for any sort of crime .But it should not be followed blindly rather human consideration must be there as per condition. I also inclined towards preset action.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, thus, while, for instance, sort of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1511.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87419354839 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74854086865 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541935483871 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.6279658849 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.928571429 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 45.0 5.01903807615 897% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288029136588 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11059754933 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113839554014 0.0667982634062 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180417526047 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434953066293 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.