You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he should get a job.
write a letter to this friend in you later
say why he/she would not enjoy going to college explain why getting a job is a good idea for her suggest types of job that would be suitable for him or her.
Hi Steve,
Good to see a letter from you and thanks for choosing me to query about choosing your platform. I am glad to suggest you and I thought a lot about it to reply you back with the decision which will decide your life.
First of all, I would say no to college. Because, when I was in the same situation like you, I dreamed of getting a nice degree from the college and later I assume can move to places for job where ever I wanted to. It never happened to me as well as other students who studied in the same class with me. College study runs very commercialized way which teaches less in terms of productivity and care a lot about grades which is not useful if one has lack of knowledge in their respective stream. Finding a nice job later might be tough because many companies now offer positions based on their age and not as per applicants grades.
In case if you start working now by choosing a job you are interested in, you will save the college time as well as it gives you real-time experience additionally it teaches you the life quickly. It may also save a lot of money to your parents which they can use for a different activity. I would like give you another suggestion in terms of job search, I prefer you should look into jobs related to marketing industry cause I know you were very good at advertising the product and pushing someone to buy. Sales industry gives first priority to people who have such skill sets like you. I hope you like the way I have explained and follow it. Don't hesitate to write me back if you need any other help.
Thanks,
John.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 644, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: Don't
...the way I have explained and follow it. Dont hesitate to write me back if you need a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, may, so, well, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 26.3917525773 155% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1302.0 937.175257732 139% => OK
No of words: 298.0 206.0 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.36912751678 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 3.78020617076 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33867580723 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 127.690721649 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590604026846 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 414.9 290.88556701 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.3523666749 44.8134815571 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.153846154 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9230769231 16.8248392259 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76923076923 4.34317383033 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276934476237 0.216113520407 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853539979958 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716919834147 0.0603063233224 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184393856336 0.12726935374 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491919956811 0.0580467560999 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.36 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.