You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go
to college or to try to get a job.
you thhinkhe she should get a job
say why she he would not enjoy going to college.
explain why getting a job is a good idea for him.her
suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her.
Dear Mona,
how are you, hope you are doing well. First of all,I want to congrats you for pass the 12th exams.You got such a good marks which is the result of your extremely hard work. Now It seems you are confused between your further study and job.
As you know, these days college admission and fee are exorbitant but level of study is not up to mark.So i consider you will not enjoy your study because all the study you have to done by yourself.
well, I will suggest You distance education so that in your spare time You can find any job. Although, for self study you have to need plethora of time, even if, I know you have spare time to do job. Like that you have option to stand on your own feet and can generate a good income, and until your study will finished you have a sufficient job experience for future. As i know you are brilliant in Math so you must choose any tutor vacancy in some coaching center.
Here you can devote your time as per your convenience. Most of the students are faces problem with math subject and they need a teacher who is efficacious and your are exemplary person for this.
hope you understand my concern, and will take a good decision. Let come in my place in your free time
so we will discuss in detail. Give regard to Uncle and Aunty.
take care.
yours friend
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 51, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...u, hope you are doing well. First of all,I want to congrats you for pass the 12th ...
^^
Line 2, column 99, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: You
...to congrats you for pass the 12th exams.You got such a good marks which is the resu...
^^^
Line 3, column 20, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
...her study and job. As you know, these days college admission and fee are exorbitan...
^^^^
Line 3, column 103, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
...nt but level of study is not up to mark.So i consider you will not enjoy your stud...
^^
Line 3, column 106, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...but level of study is not up to mark.So i consider you will not enjoy your study ...
^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Well
...e study you have to done by yourself. well, I will suggest You distance education...
^^^^
Line 4, column 25, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... by yourself. well, I will suggest You distance education so that in your spare...
^^
Line 4, column 312, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'finish'
Suggestion: finish
... good income, and until your study will finished you have a sufficient job experience fo...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 373, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ufficient job experience for future. As i know you are brilliant in Math so you m...
^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hope
...d your are exemplary person for this. hope you understand my concern, and will tak...
^^^^
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Take
...etail. Give regard to Uncle and Aunty. take care. yours friend
^^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yours
...regard to Uncle and Aunty. take care. yours friend
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, well, you know, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1068.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 247.0 206.0 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.32388663968 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.11456989909 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582995951417 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 336.6 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2536905346 44.8134815571 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.1538461538 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.69230769231 4.34317383033 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 2.54639175258 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181930895042 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710337004506 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470002922073 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0899623775557 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0648594069827 0.0580467560999 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.78 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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