Many People think that too much attention and resources are given to protection of wild animals and birds.
Do you agree or disagree?!
these days people are extremely concerned about animals and birds and quite a few suggests that we have to pay much more attention towards them and i consider this is absolutely right and agreed with this. Everyone love the animals and birds. but in current ear we hardly see any birds around our cities. gradually they vanish out from our world.
people are turned in to self-satisfaction and for their pleasure they like to kill the innocent animals. Because of commercial world, animals skin bags,shoes, and cloths are so popular and a sign of prosperous life. such kind of people pay highly amount for animals skin products, which tend to hunt them and earn more and more money. because of these thinking wild animals are now hunted rapidly, even government banned these kind of criminal activities but anti animals people still do it in any cost.
if we talk about birds, concrete forest already devastated them. birds have no shelter like trees so this time we hardly see any birds around us. Highrise building, polluted environment and plethora of reason which is the consequence of finish their life.
it is seemingly that one day we will lost of all animals and birds and only see them in pictures and movies. it is an enormous issues and government and people should come forward to save them. first of all we have to aware our society and tell them how birds are important in our life. we can grew trees more and more so that birds can make their nest and live a peaceful life. Provide water and food for them. on the other hand, for wild animals government should make callous law and apply them immediately. if any one hunted wild animals, that time authorities take a quick decision arrest them and provision for punishment. Moreover, ban on all kind of product which made from animals body and fine that people who tend to buy it,
to conclude, i mediate that animals and birds are our precious wealth so keep them safe and for their protection make an effective law.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, so, still, kind of, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 10.4138276553 259% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1638.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69340974212 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37531841762 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527220630372 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7554857265 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2105263158 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3684210526 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05263157895 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190138319762 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0556334579766 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049796764943 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110309333692 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417633964718 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.