You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he / she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter:
1. Say why he / she would not enjoy going to college
2. Explain why getting a job is a good idea for him / her
3. Suggest types of jobs that would be suitable for him / her
Dear Yakuvu,
I am so happy hearing from you, and thanks again for having me over for Christmas last December; I must say it was a memorable experience and everything I go through my gallery and see the pictures we took, I am glad I made the right decision honouring your invitation.
Taking up a job is now better than enrolling for a degree at the college because of the economic situations in Nigeria. most employers prefer to employ secondary school levers instead of graduates, to reduce cost and maximize profits. For example, the organization I work has suspended recruiting college degree holders ,they rather employ Olevel graduate so as to pray minimal salary on contract basis only.
Please apply for vacancies in customer services oriented roles, so that you can run your degree program on part time basis, as most of the opening comes with flexible working hours . Which will allow you work and earn something to support your family.
Hoping you consider this and make a good decision.
Regards.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Yakuvu, I am so happy hearing from you, and than...
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Line 2, column 49, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...happy hearing from you, and thanks again for having me over for Christmas last De...
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Line 4, column 121, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Most
... of the economic situations in Nigeria. most employers prefer to employ secondary sc...
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Line 4, column 320, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...pended recruiting college degree holders ,they rather employ Olevel graduate so as...
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Line 4, column 357, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...ers ,they rather employ Olevel graduate so as to pray minimal salary on contract basis o...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 410, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... minimal salary on contract basis only. Please apply for vacancies in customer s...
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Line 6, column 108, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...that you can run your degree program on part time basis, as most of the opening comes wit...
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Line 6, column 181, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...pening comes with flexible working hours . Which will allow you work and earn some...
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Line 8, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...is and make a good decision. Regards.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
second, so, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 866.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06432748538 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58060955985 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.754385964912 0.622605031667 121% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.2095763665 44.8134815571 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.714285714 76.5299724578 162% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4285714286 16.8248392259 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28571428571 4.34317383033 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139585572062 0.216113520407 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593874503177 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0317790079723 0.0603063233224 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0806451193526 0.12726935374 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.01745447108 0.0580467560999 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 8.37731958763 174% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 70.7449484536 67% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 7.45979381443 170% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 8.71597938144 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 7.59969072165 127% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.