You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he / she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter:
1. say why he / she would not enjoy going to college
2. explain why getting a job is a good idea for him / her
3. suggest types of jobs that would be suitable for him / her
Dear john,
I hope this letter finds you in radiant health and to the best of spirits. I received your letter yesterday and I was proud to read that you successfully completed your schooling with brilliant scores. I am writing this letter to advice you to choose from college studies or job.
Although both these options have their own benefits, however i feel that you would not enjoy going to college as it as a lot of assignment works and also you would be frustrated by the hectic schedule.
As per my opinion, you should opt for a job because this will add an experience to your career and along with that you can pursue a short-term technical course. I am sure that your advanced computer skills would be enough to offer you a starting job. I came to know about uncle harry business loss last year and it would be really great if you could help him financially. This is the time to show your support personally as well as monetarily.
Today's employment news sections of ABC newspaper displays multiple job options for teenagers. Nowadays, many companies hire students for internship program and offer a decent incentives as well. I would suggest you to look for a good IT company for internship, which will further boost your career.
I hope you consider my advice positively. Best of luck for a great career.
Warm Regards,
Daniel
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear john, I hope this letter finds you in radiant ...
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Line 2, column 284, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to choose from college studies or job. Although both these options have their o...
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Line 4, column 62, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ptions have their own benefits, however i feel that you would not enjoy going to ...
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Line 6, column 445, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pport personally as well as monetarily. Todays employment news sections of ABC n...
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Line 8, column 176, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'incentive'?
Suggestion: incentive
...r internship program and offer a decent incentives as well. I would suggest you to look fo...
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Line 8, column 238, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'companies'?
Suggestion: companies
...would suggest you to look for a good IT company for internship, which will further boos...
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Line 10, column 8, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l further boost your career. I hope you consider my advice positively. Best...
^^
Line 12, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...uck for a great career. Warm Regards, Daniel
^^^
Line 13, column 7, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... great career. Warm Regards, Daniel
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, really, so, well, i feel, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1134.0 937.175257732 121% => OK
No of words: 236.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80508474576 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56781059458 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627118644068 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 330.3 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4503245743 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8571428571 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35714285714 4.34317383033 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327817943449 0.216113520407 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106459490595 0.0766984524023 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0808757388916 0.0603063233224 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171473171372 0.12726935374 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0863941368019 0.0580467560999 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.