You recently sent some documents by post but they did not arrive Write a letter to the post manager In your letter Give details of the situation Describe the documents Say what action you want the post office to take

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You recently sent some documents by post, but they did not arrive. Write a letter to the post manager. In your letter
Give details of the situation
Describe the documents
Say what action you want the post office to take.

Dear sir or madam,

I am writing to inform you about the problem I have faced with your company service regarding delivery of some important documents.
I posted some documents two weeks ago to World Education Services in Canada for assessment. I contacted them today to find out the results of the assessment and found out they have not received them yet. According to the information on your website any parcel should arrive at its destination within 7 working days.
The envelope contained the original copy of my master diploma ,records of my educational background as well as 100 Euros to cover the costs of assessment. It was signed and sealed by the University of Tehran. My order was sent by 87530 tracking number.
Considering the notable delay in despatching the documents, I am requesting you to kindly help me understand the cause of the problem and make sure this delay will not take any longer as I will miss the deadline for sending evaluated certificates to university due to this mismanagement.
Thanks for your support.

Yours sincerely,
Alec Tim

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 92, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...tion Services in Canada for assessment. I contacted them today to find out the re...
^
Line 4, column 156, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o find out the results of the assessment and found out they have not received the...
^^
Line 5, column 62, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...d the original copy of my master diploma ,records of my educational background as ...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, so, well, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 899.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99444444444 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83876929515 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.683333333333 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.8013192497 44.8134815571 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.9 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144382090059 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0483440960846 0.0766984524023 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464419964144 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0662172816276 0.12726935374 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433471137586 0.0580467560999 75% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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