It is more important to use the space in cities well than make them look beautiful. To what extent do you agree?
It is more important to use the space in cities well than make them look beautiful. To what extent do you agree?
One of the most urgent issues facing the world today is the fast growing population. As this huge population requires living accomodation, many opine that using the space of the cities properly is more important than paying attention to the beauty of the cities. In this essay, I discuss why I believe that the beauty of the cities is just as important.
On the one hand, shelter is a basic requirement for life and improper construction will lead to lack of housing. Without enough home people become homeless and consequently prone to get involved in committing crime or being a victim of crime. In addition, housing is very important for the countries which are hoping to develop their economies. As a result of industrialisation, many job-seekers migrate to cities in order to pursue a well paid job and afford a good living. This trend increases the demand for lodging which should be considered in constructions. For instance, Tehran has become one of the most expensive cities for renting or buying a house as there are not enough houses because of the high rate of migration to the city. This condition has made difficulties for both citizens and immigrants.
On the other hand, the beauty of cities helps city dwellers to keep their mind and soul healthy in the hustle and bustle of crowded cities. It should be noted that a healthy soul is as important as a healthy body. Trying to find out a solution to accommodate the ever growing population, should not lead to neglecting the natural need for beauty. Moreover, attractive surroundings not only improves the habitants' life quality, but also attracts tourists which brings prosperity and financial developments. For instance, Romans earn two times more from their city attractions in comparison with any other cities in Italy.
In conclusion, I believe that , although providing settlement to the huge amount of people who are willing to live in cities is worth consideration and attention, the importance of beauty in cities for residents 'health and prosperity should not be underestimated.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, look, moreover, so, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1828.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03581267218 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88749725222 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553719008264 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 567.0 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2491192336 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.555555556 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05555555556 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312525544796 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104156137928 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.164334943965 0.0667982634062 246% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.268454645615 0.151304729494 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.312240869272 0.056905535591 549% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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