You recently sent some documents by post, but they did not arrive. Write a letter to the post manager. In your letter
o Give details of the situation
o Describe the documents
o Say what action you want the post office to take.
Dear Mr. Long,
I have been a satisfied customer until this month when my documents that sent by your post have not arrived in time. This makes me worried because the documents need to be applied at WES Canada before 27th March.
The documents are very important for me because it includes my transcript and my degree that has to arrive at WES, Canada to be assessed whether it is equivalency to Canada’ s Master degree or not. I’m sure you will appreciate this is a urgent case to solve as soon as possible.
I would be very grateful if you could check immediately where my documents are now. And I ask you to confirm in writing that you will prioritize sending my documents by express service rightaway and when my documents can arrive at WES’ office, Canada. Inspite of the fact that the arrival of these documents certainly delay, I do hope your soonest action will help me settle everything smoothly.
I’m looking forward to receiving your prompt response.
Kind regards,
Lien Tran
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 235, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...t. I’m sure you will appreciate this is a urgent case to solve as soon as possibl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 830.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77011494253 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52030989167 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.66091954023 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7252370055 44.8134815571 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2222222222 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.11111111111 4.34317383033 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210750712226 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0808706603722 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574868962475 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116175574444 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067902563452 0.0580467560999 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.